Changes between Version 1 and Version 2 of member-email-templates

Timestamp:

Sep 16, 2009, 10:01:12 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Mallory Knodel

Comment:

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member-email-templates

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 == Hosting Order Email template ==
 
-This template is sent everytime a new hosting order is created.
+This template is sent each time a new hosting order is created.
 
 {{{
@@ -13 +13 @@
 
 Below please find important information about your membership. 
-If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact us at 
-718-303-3204 x. 2020 or support@mayfirst.org.
 
-Your web site address is: http://{identifier}
+==STATEMENT OF UNITY==
 
-If your domain name is not registered or you have not transferred 
-your domain to the May First/People Link name servers, you can
-access your web site via:
-
-http://{temp_address}
-
-For information on how to configure your domain to use the May 
-First/People Link name servers, please visit: 
-
-https://support.mayfirst.org/wiki/transfer_site_to_mfpl
+We are much more than your web host, "we" are all members of MF/PL and together we are making a difference in progressive technology practices in addition to addressing problems of global crisis. To stay involved as a constituent MF/PL member, send us your organizations announcements, news, and events and look our for our monthly publication "The Lowdown".
 
 ==SET YOUR PASSWORD==
@@ -35 +24 @@
 To set your password, please click on the link below. You will be 
 prompted to create a new password for your account. You will not
-be able to login to any services until you create your password.
+be able to login to any hosting services until you create your password.
 
 {password_reset_url}
@@ -56 +45 @@
 accounts, email lists, etc.
 
+==WEBSITE==
+
+Your web site address is: http://{identifier}
+
+If your domain name is not registered or you have not transferred 
+your domain to the May First/People Link name servers, you can
+access your web site via:
+
+http://{temp_address}
+
+For information on how to configure your domain to use the May 
+First/People Link name servers, please visit: 
+
+https://support.mayfirst.org/wiki/transfer_site_to_mfpl
+
 ==COPY FILES TO YOUR WEB SITE==
 
@@ -72 +76 @@
 
 If you would like access to MySQL databases or to Drupal, please 
-contact support.
+contact support. Reference: https://support.mayfirst.org/wiki/faq#Databaserelated
 
 ==CONTACTING SUPPORT==
 
-If you have any questions or run into any problems, please don't 
-hesitate to post a ticket on our support system:
+If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact us at 
+718-303-3204 x. 2020 or support@mayfirst.org. Or check out FAQ page at https://support.mayfirst.org/wiki/faq. You can also post a ticket on our support system:
 
 https://support.mayfirst.org/
@@ -142 +146 @@
 
 According to our records, we have not received full payment for 
-your membership dues. 
+your yearly or monthly membership dues. 
 
 (If you have paid within the last 2 weeks, then please disregard 
 this notice.)
 
-It is very expensive to keep our servers and operations running
-smoothly.  Without the prompt payment of your membership dues,
-this task become very difficult. Please contribute to our shared
+It is very expensive to keep our servers and operations running.  Late payment of membership dues strains our collective resources. Please contribute to our shared
 infrastructure by paying your May First/People Link dues
 promptly! 
 
 If you have any questions about your dues, or you think we have
-made an error do not hesitate to contact us at 718-303-3204 or
+made an error please contact us directly at 718-303-3204 or
 members@mayfirst.org.
+
+Thanks!
 
 May First/People Link
 
-Thanks!
-
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 }}}