Changes between Version 6 and Version 7 of mfpl/2008_palm_card_text

Timestamp:

Feb 28, 2008, 7:50:50 PM (17 years ago)

Author:

alfredo

Comment:

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mfpl/2008_palm_card_text

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 == Data ==
 
-Complete access to your data: to produce it, share it, export and import it, control it and decide what's going to be done with it. Do you currently have this level of control over your Internet data? 
+You have a right to complete access to your data: to produce it, share it, export and import it, control it and decide what's going to be done with it. Do you currently have this level of control over your Internet data? 
 
 = Second Panel =
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 == Programs ==
 
-Complete access to use, move, change, manipulate and share all programs on the Internet and get assistance in doing any of those things. Would you be able to take your database or web mail program or web site program with you to another provider if you wanted to?
+You have a right to complete access to use, move, change, manipulate and share all programs on the Internet and get assistance in doing any of those things. Would you be able to take your database or web mail program or web site program with you to another provider if you wanted to?
 
 = Third Panel =
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 == Democracy ==
 
-Complete transparency in and available explanations of all processes that dictate and enable our work on the Internet and the right to participate in decisions about those processes. Do you know how any why decisions are made regarding the programs and services you use online?
+You have a right to complete transparency in and available explanations of all processes that dictate and enable our work on the Internet and the right to participate in decisions about those processes. Do you know how any why decisions are made regarding the programs and services you use online?
 
 = Fourth Panel =
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 == Vision ==
 
-Complete confidence that those we work with to provide our Internet tools and protocols do so because they are part of our movement and share a commitment to building a radically better world. 
+You have a right to complete confidence that those we work with to provide our Internet tools and protocols do so because they are part of our movement and share a commitment to building a radically better world. 
 
 = Back Panel =