Changes between Version 33 and Version 34 of support-team/plan/2014

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Feb 6, 2014, 2:57:39 PM (10 years ago)

Author:

Mallory Knodel

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support-team/plan/2014

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 PROPOSED 
 
-The Support, Infrastructure and Data Sovereignty (SDS) team is responsible ensuring that are members have access to a reliable technology infrastructure that is designed and implemented based on the values of freedom, transparency and democracy.
+The Support, Infrastructure and Data Sovereignty (SDS) team is responsible for ensuring that our members have access to a reliable technology infrastructure that is designed and implemented based on the values of freedom, transparency and democracy.
 
 == Goal for the Year ==
 
-In addition to our on-going goal of ensuring the data sovereignty of our organization and members, this year, we are focusing in particular on member communication: we have lots of great tools that nobody knows about. We want to improve our communication to our members of what we have and how to use it
+In addition to our on-going goal of ensuring the data sovereignty of our organization and members, this year we are focusing in particular on member communication: we have lots of great tools that nobody knows about. We want to improve our communication to our members of what we have and how to use them.
   
-The benefit to our membership is not only knowledge and ability to use these tools, but also a strengthened sense of their membership in or our ganization and what that membership means. By communicating what we have, we also have the opportunity to communicate who we are and why we exist.
+The benefit to our membership is not only knowledge and ability to use these tools, but also a strengthened sense of their membership in our organization and what that membership means. By communicating what we have, we also have the opportunity to communicate who we are and why we exist.
 
 == Outreach ==