Changes between Version 14 and Version 15 of internet_rights_workshop

Timestamp:

Sep 16, 2008, 7:11:21 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Daniel Kahn Gillmor

Comment:

linking to specification

internet_rights_workshop

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 In this workshop, we seek to collaboratively write an Internet Justice Bill of Rights. We break the audience into small groups of 4 - 5 people.  Each small group speaks with one voice via a "scribe" who enters the group's proposed rights into a web-based system. A dynamic, projected display of the current state of the aggregate Bill of Rights is visible to all.
 
-All ideas belong to the entire workshop: any group can edit any Right, whether they wrote the original version or not  All revisions of a given Right are stored, but only the most recent edit is projected to the group as a whole. The group which creates a new version of a right automatically endorses that right, but otherwise holds no special connection to it.
+All ideas belong to the entire workshop: any group can edit any Right, whether they wrote the original version or not  All revisions of a given Right are stored, but only the most recent version is projected to the group as a whole. The group which creates a new version of a right automatically endorses that right, but otherwise holds no special connection to it.
 
 Each group also has the ability to endorse any Right that seems worthy. When a Right is edited, existing endorsements are cleared; each group needs to decide if they want to endorse the new version. Rights with more endorsers float to the top of the projected list, while the rights with fewer endorsers sink to the bottom.
 
 To keep the Bill of Rights to a manageable, concise size, only 10 rights can exist at a given time. If 10 rights already exist, the only way to add a new idea to the Bill is to edit an existing right, which requires engaging other groups in a dialog to ensure an adequate number of re-endorsements.
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+You may also be interested in [wiki:./specification a more detailed specification of the workshop].
 
 == Goals ==
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  * [https://www.ussf2007.org/en/node/17107 US Social Forum, June 2007, Atlanta, GA]
- * [http://current.workingdirectory.net//posts/2008/gmc-internet-rights/index.html Grassroots Media Conference, March 2008, New York, NY]
+ * [http://current.workingdirectory.net/posts/2008/gmc-internet-rights/index.html Grassroots Media Conference, March 2008, New York, NY]
  * [http://current.workingdirectory.net/posts/2008/internet-parts-one-and-two/  Allied Media Conference, June 2008, Detroit, MI]
  * [http://current.workingdirectory.net/posts/2008/internet-rights-grut-2008/ Grassroots Use Of Technology Conference, June 2008, Boston, MA]